I really didn’t enjoy this, but it’s probably the sort of guff they would put out so you nailed the brief
Not bad
Some good camera work, maybe would have chosen some different parts of Belfast to include but solid enough. Pretty good voice over work too.
If you’re going to bring up The Troubles I would probably have framed that in a different way but you’re probably like 18 so I think you’ve plenty of potential.
Is that your real accent son?
Please get someone else to do the voiceover.
Take a shot each time you hear Belfast
I wouldn’t have anything Troubles related in it, especially in the opening scenes. Don’t start promotional ads with any stigma or negativity, all positivity. Other than that, great effort! Hope the tech course goes well.
As a College Media Practice Lecturer id give that a Merit
Legitimately good video for starting out. A few things, the steady cam filter is a bit obvious on some shots and the cutting of clips could be tighter, simple fixes with a few re-shoots to gather better B footage and perhaps removing the footage entirely of the troubles, it’s a bit jarring but a solid video all in all.
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I really didn’t enjoy this, but it’s probably the sort of guff they would put out so you nailed the brief
Not bad
Some good camera work, maybe would have chosen some different parts of Belfast to include but solid enough. Pretty good voice over work too.
If you’re going to bring up The Troubles I would probably have framed that in a different way but you’re probably like 18 so I think you’ve plenty of potential.
Is that your real accent son?
Please get someone else to do the voiceover.
Take a shot each time you hear Belfast
I wouldn’t have anything Troubles related in it, especially in the opening scenes. Don’t start promotional ads with any stigma or negativity, all positivity. Other than that, great effort! Hope the tech course goes well.
As a College Media Practice Lecturer id give that a Merit
Legitimately good video for starting out. A few things, the steady cam filter is a bit obvious on some shots and the cutting of clips could be tighter, simple fixes with a few re-shoots to gather better B footage and perhaps removing the footage entirely of the troubles, it’s a bit jarring but a solid video all in all.
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