Could you, please, correct my Bulgarian assignment? 🙏🏻

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1. most of it is decent. It is okay, although in bulgarian such short cut sentences is a weird thing and we use a lot more passive style or whatever it was called (basically “the mouse was eaten by the cat”)

   Your last paragraph definitely needs to be touched upon though because it seems like it was translated through google. Приятелят ми е българин и не знам дали може да пее на испански. Не мога да бъда сигурен обаче, тъй като досега не съм го чувал и да говори на испански, така че има и вероятност да може.
   И когато мексиканците започнат да пеят, планирам да взема една от големите им шапки директно от главите им и да избягам. Това е втората ми мечта. Това би била моята идеална почивка.

2. Someone else should correct me if im wrong but I don’t think there shouldn’t be a comma after “след това”

   Also “да ми пее” not “да ми пея”.

3. Overall it is very good, i suggest you submit it like you wrote it, so that the teacher can explain where needs editing :)…

4. It’s good and perfectly understandable. There are minor errors, but you’re learning. I second the opinion that you should turn it in as it is so your teacher can focus on the right things when explaining.

5. Моята идеална почивка е в луксозен хотел някъде в Мексико. Може да е в Канкун, не е толкова важно за мен. Важното е хотелът да е all inclusive, защото много обичам да ям. Ям много. Също пия доста… и често.

   В хотела, след поредната порция ядене и пиене, ще направя много снимки за Инстаграм, защото искам всички да ми завиждат – особено бившата приятелка на гаджето ми. Тя не следи инстаграма ми, но това не е проблем, на нея ще ѝ изпращам снимките на лично.

   След това ще помоля мексиканците да ми попеят мариачи. Това е една от мечтите ми – някой да ми пее мариачи. Приятелят ми е българин и мисля, че не може да пее на испански. Не го знам със сигурност, защото не се е опитвал да говори испански, така че е напълно възможно пък и да може.

   Когато мексиканците започнат да пеят, ще грабна една от големите им шапки директно от нечия глава и ще забегна – това е втората ми мечта.

   А това е моята идея за идеална почивка.

6. ПриятелЯт , а не Ът
   Иначе it’s all good !

7. I summon u/DirtyDawg808 to tell you how to say “all inclusive” in bulgarian

8. Damn, that’s crazy, man! Others already pointed out the issues, I just want to say your grasp of the language is really impressive. I’m honestly having a hard time believing it. It’s better than a lot of native speakers.

9. where are you from?

10. Well honestly it looks like somebody from Bulgaria who wasn’t really good in school wrote it. You can see many mistakes, but they are on a really advanced grammatical level, so for a foreigner it’s perfectly fine and understandable.
    Overall I would say that it is very well written for somebody who is not native and the logic of the text is easy understandable, which is the most important.
    Mostly your mistakes are: Some sentences doesn’t look ‘ Bulgarian ‘ I would say, yes you can say that they are grammatically correct, but a native Bulgarian wouldn’t write with short sentences, we like to extend as much as possible one sentence. If you want to practice on that you can read Bulgarian books to see how normally people construct sentences ; Some verbs are not conjugated correctly ; also the punctuation is not correct at some places.
    Yeah but as I said for a foreigner it is really well written, although there are mistakes, which are not very striking, the logic in the text is easy to get and this is the most important. If the language is really something important to you, you can overcome the mistakes with practice, don’t worry 😌

11. You will fit very well in Bulgaria…

12. Булгар, Булгар!

13. It is *perfect*. Also this is the dream of many more americans. Cheers!

14. The point of an assignment is to do it yourself and learn from your mistakes, not have the freaking internet fix your mistakes. Putting this here OP has invalidated the entire point of writing that essay.

15. u/obi_wan_sosig

16. It was actually pretty good. I just suggest that on the last row you write “Това е моята идеална почивка”, the last paragraph it is “Когато мексиканците започнат да пеят, ще хванат една от големите им шапки, директно от главите им и ще избягам.” And on the first paragraph “Ям много” is pretty much useless, it just makes a repeating. Overall it is pretty well written, keep up the good work!

17. This is both wholesome and toxic af.