hello! I was born in Lithuania but have grown up in the states. while I can speak lithuanian fluently, I was not taught it formally or how to read and write. my mother has been going through a difficult time and I wanted to present her this poem in the hopes that it would resonate. would really appreciate feedback!
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europeanxtrash
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Writing poems is not for you
I suggest posting original if it’s in English. It reads a bit weird in places.
But few I notice
Tu jas prižiūrėjai ir jomis rūpinaisi. *
“bet jausmai išlieka tokie ryškūs” – I’d remove “tokie”
Garbage.