{"id":345348,"date":"2025-10-31T10:36:12","date_gmt":"2025-10-31T10:36:12","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/345348\/"},"modified":"2025-10-31T10:36:12","modified_gmt":"2025-10-31T10:36:12","slug":"philly-students-are-using-ai-tools-to-write-essays-can-they-do-it-responsibly","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/345348\/","title":{"rendered":"Philly students are using AI tools to write essays. Can they do it responsibly?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In many high-school classrooms today, the rise of artificial intelligence tools is quietly reshaping what it means to \u201cput pen to paper.\u201d Students are increasingly using AI assistants to brainstorm ideas, draft paragraphs, even polish final versions of essays \u2014 raising questions about authorship, skill development and fair assessment.<\/p>\n<p>Case in point: That last paragraph was generated through ChatGPT.<\/p>\n<p>So with these new, tempting writing shortcuts \u2014 where it\u2019s practically impossible to judge the difference between what was written by a human and what\u2019s not \u2014 how are students and teachers in Philadelphia navigating?<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIt\u2019s a little idiosyncratic,\u201d said <a href=\"https:\/\/www.gse.upenn.edu\/faculty\/amy-stornaiuolo\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Amy Stornaiuolo<\/a>, a professor of education at the <a href=\"https:\/\/www.upenn.edu\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">University of Pennsylvania<\/a>, who researches AI in schools. \u201cIt\u2019s up to the individual instructor how they want to take up AI in any particular way. There\u2019s not like a university-wide, or even a school-wide set of guidelines or mandates or rules or approaches.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In other words, AI technology has arrived at such a breakneck pace it\u2019s hard to keep up.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI work primarily with teachers and students,\u201d Stornaiuolo said. \u201cI work a lot with young people and how they might be using it in their everyday lives, both in and out of school. And I kind of hear the same story, which is that they don\u2019t get a lot of guidance. They might have a teacher who is kind of up to date with it, but in general, schools themselves tend not to be having a unified message.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In <a href=\"https:\/\/www.commonsensemedia.org\/sites\/default\/files\/featured-content\/files\/common-sense-ai-polling-memo-may-10-2023-final.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">2023, Common Sense Media<\/a> conducted a study, which showed that half of students between 12 and 18 years old reported using ChatGPT for schoolwork, 38% said they did so without permission from their teacher and 56% said they knew a friend or classmate who had used the technology. And that was two years ago.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>So whether teachers and schools are ready to alter their curriculum to factor in AI or not, many students are already relying on the technology.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThere is some early data that indicates that using AI in the classroom or for writing and communication, probably will, or does, displace key moments of development that build the skills that allow us to do increasingly difficult tasks,\u201d said Kris Perry, the executive director of <a href=\"https:\/\/www.childrenandscreens.org\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Children and Screens<\/a>, an organization that educates about kids and tech with events, webinars, podcasts and more.<\/p>\n<p>\u201c<a href=\"https:\/\/www.media.mit.edu\/publications\/your-brain-on-chatgpt\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">MIT<\/a> very recently found when students wrote essays with LLMs, large language models, it produced lower levels of brain activity than if they had written it without any assistance at all,\u201d Perry said.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Artificial intelligence could have a negative impact on student\u2019s independent creativity.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cIf you repeatedly use a tool that\u2019s designed to do analytical work for you, it just reduces the brain activity and what some people refer to as the inter region of the brain where that deep thinking would usually occur,\u201d Perry said. \u201cAnd it\u2019s displacing the growth of that area by offloading the cognitive effort onto the tool. So the tool, you might say, is expending the effort and the student isn\u2019t.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>What\u2019s more, if students are using AI to generate their work \u2014 they may feel less satisfaction and sense of ownership when they finally finish that essay and hand it in.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u2018\u201cRight to be concerned\u201d<\/p>\n<p>When it comes to AI, parents are \u201cright to be concerned,\u201d according to Stornaiuolo, and the best way to address that concern is to get informed.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cFor parents, really understanding the policies around [AI] for the schools that their kids are in would be really important,\u201d she said. \u201cThere\u2019s a lot of really very serious ramifications of using it in particular ways that I think being informed about would be really helpful.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"780\" height=\"520\" src=\"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/10\/Amy-talking-copy.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-218014\"  \/>Penn professor Amy Stornaiuolo. (Courtesy of Amy Stornaiuolo)<\/p>\n<p>Stornaiuolo\u2019s research team is intergenerational \u2014 meaning that while she studies high school students, she\u2019s also working with high school students.<\/p>\n<p>Angelina Vo, 17, has been working on Stornaiuolo\u2019s WAi (Writing with AI) research team over the last year. She\u2019s a senior at <a href=\"https:\/\/ehs.wcasd.net\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">East High School in West Chester<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAs a high school student, I feel like I\u2019ve kind of experienced the positive and the negatives,\u201d Vo said of her AI usage.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>When she first began experimenting with AI tools, she would rely on it to generate content for writing assignments as a way to \u201cmaximize\u201d her time.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWhen I was going through applications for summer programs, I realized that I had completely lost my style and my personality in my writing,\u201d she said. \u201cI kind of had to go back and discover, \u2018Where did I go wrong?\u2019 \u201c<\/p>\n<p>She had lost those \u201cquirky vocabulary words\u201d she liked to use, and found that her sentence and paragraph structures felt foreign.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI had to go back and look at old assignments that I did and kind of try to regain how I used to write,\u201d Vo said.<\/p>\n<p>Using AI responsibly<\/p>\n<p>Conversations around AI in schools are often tinged with a sense of fear, but Stornaiuolo\u2019s research shows that teenage usage of the technology is nuanced.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cAt the core, is that tension,\u201d she said, \u201cwhich is, \u2018How to create.\u2019 \u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cA lot of my fellow classmates are misusing [AI] and letting it think for them,\u201d Vo said, \u201cwhereas I feel like there\u2019s a way that you can use AI responsibly and keep your own thoughts.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>But what does responsible AI use look like?<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe talk about boundary-making practices in our work,\u201d Stornaiuolo said. \u201cBoundary-making practices that [students] engage in are things like, \u2018I only upload small parts of it and not the whole thing to get specific kinds of feedback, or \u2018I keep it in a separate window so I can keep it separate from my real writing, and see what it does with my writing over here, but not let it infect\u2019 \u2014 some people use that term \u2014 \u2018my original writing.\u2019 \u201d<\/p>\n<p>The team is also monitoring how AI might affect students from different socioeconomic backgrounds.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThere\u2019s a disproportionate number of students from marginalized identities and communities who are accused of using AI when they have not,\u201d Stornaiuolo said.<\/p>\n<p>Some teenagers that she has spoken with are so concerned about getting accused of cheating that they don\u2019t use AI tools at all.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cKids from higher socioeconomic status families have parents that have more options for distracting them,\u201d Perry said. \u201cPutting them outside in the real world, supervising them, controlling their devices, giving each child its own individual device and controlling it, whereas children from lower-income homes may be sharing a device with an older child, parents that are working multiple jobs, not in a safe neighborhood, where they can be outside away from the device.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>In other words, kids from higher socioeconomic backgrounds might receive more education on how to use new technologies responsibly.<\/p>\n<p>Letting teens guide their future<\/p>\n<p>Whether we like it or not, AI is here and is shaping the future of how writers write.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe adolescent brain is still not fully developed,\u201d Perry said. \u201cIt\u2019s at a very sensitive point actually in development, a little like early childhood, where the executive function of the frontal lobe is not fully formed.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Still, she doesn\u2019t think that means that teens should have their agency taken away.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThis is their future,\u201d Perry said. \u201cThey do hold the power to go online and use the tools before they\u2019re safe. They can support each other in understanding what they are, what they aren\u2019t, and how they\u2019ll impact their brains.\u201d\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Research shows that letting them shape the path forward might be the best approach to getting them interested in responsible AI use. A <a href=\"https:\/\/www.brookings.edu\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/01\/REPORT_The-Disengagement-Gap_FINAL.pdf\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">study from the Brookings Institute<\/a> revealed that students feel more engaged in their studies when they are given some freedom and say in their curriculums and projects.\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u201cWe recommend that educators \u2014 including state, districts, and school leaders, alongside teachers and other education personnel \u2014 find ways to maximize students\u2019 opportunity to explore,\u201d the study said.<\/p>\n<p>Perry echoed this idea.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cChildren\u2019s safety was not top of mind when they developed these products,\u201d she said. \u201cThis is a great opportunity for the youth to step up and lead and support each other in slow-walking this while they work out some of the safety issues that have already cropped up with the products.\u201d\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>Certainly, Stornaiuolo\u2019s intergenerational research team is championing this idea.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI think that we can trust teenagers,\u201d Vo said. \u201cWe have to teach people across all ages. This is a new thing that we\u2019re being introduced to. So everybody is going to have questions about it \u2014 questions about whether they should or should not use it \u2026 If people are taught about it, if they\u2019re more aware about how it can change your writerly identity, or impact this and that, then they may be more mindful of how they use it.\u201d<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"In many high-school classrooms today, the rise of artificial intelligence tools is quietly reshaping what it means to&hellip;\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":345349,"comment_status":"","ping_status":"","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[5132],"tags":[5229,18073,302,407,26251,1448,2830,1311,67,586,132,5230,68,2969],"class_list":{"0":"post-345348","1":"post","2":"type-post","3":"status-publish","4":"format-standard","5":"has-post-thumbnail","7":"category-philadelphia","8":"tag-america","9":"tag-artificial-intelligence-ai","10":"tag-chatgpt","11":"tag-education","12":"tag-high-school","13":"tag-pa","14":"tag-pennsylvania","15":"tag-philadelphia","16":"tag-united-states","17":"tag-united-states-of-america","18":"tag-unitedstates","19":"tag-unitedstatesofamerica","20":"tag-us","21":"tag-usa"},"share_on_mastodon":{"url":"https:\/\/pubeurope.com\/@us\/115468342691949568","error":""},"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/345348","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=345348"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/345348\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/345349"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=345348"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=345348"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.europesays.com\/us\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=345348"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}